Sweet beauty

You are a beauty in your own right, 

Large eyes dominating the world, 

Known for these; for all to see, 

Your kind smile and your chortle, 

So unique, i know you miles away, 

A free bird flying for all to see, 

Never weighed down by the demons inside, 

Flying far, flying here. 

Reviews

[Adelise Eclair]

I really like the gentleness in this piece. The emotions expressed are pure and sincere. Good job on this poem :D

[spayne94]

Thank you, I wrote it about my younger sister, I was aiming for a gentle poem.