A Poem by spockrockable

Let me fill the hollow in your chest,
these are my words so behave your best.


You must feel empty without a heart,
so lets keep something beating in the dark.


You tried to steal my heart,
For now my friend it's time to part.


My feelings are sewn to my sleeve,
but my heart is under lock and key.


I'd rather not have your soul,
I fear I'd freeze from the cold.


I thought it would be warm in your arms,
it appears I  was a fool for your charms.


I suppose you're lucky to have the hollow,
it's better than pain, so hard to swallow.


I wont deny I care for you.
Maybe some day you'll love me too.


Did that fill the hollow in your chest?
I hope it did. I tried my best.

© 2011 spockrockable

Author's Note

any feedback is welcome :3 I'm open to critisism but please don't be too harsh, this is the first time I've shared a poem I've written. :)

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This is a really good poem!! :)
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 1, 2011
Last Updated on December 1, 2011
Tags: love, heartbreak, breakups, closure



london, United Kingdom

I write poems. Sorry if you don't like them. I just say what I feel. :) more..