THOU PURE ONCE

You are so sweet and pure when you visited me first, but later the situation changed.

So bright and glittering 

When you first visited me 

Pure and fresh from Him , but not now

Oh soul ! what made you fade ?

Turned  impure my days and deeds

New  black marks daily added

The distance every day becomes wider

From the eternal to the mortal .

No I , without you,

But you be without me.

I know my frailties

But no control over you.

Wish you were with me always

For , I'm nothing when you leave

But you'll go one day , without an adieu

To merge with the Light above !

You tend to move towards the right

But me , divert you to the wrong ,

Causes for the conflicts from within

Unpardonable and painful !

sayed thangal

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Wish you were with me always




For , I'm nothing when you leave




But you'll go one day , without an adieu




To merge with the Light above !"

[Sami Khalil]

The purity of the soul when it is tainted with sin and wicked deeds. An ever struggle and conflict within...A very good write...:).................

[SAYED THANGAL]

you got what I intended , thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...You are welcome...:)...............

[Praveeta]

Great poem about soul. Thanks for creating a lovely piece.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks a lot praveeta

[Praveeta]

You are welcome.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

it was good reading it sir...yeah things do change a lot and sometimes it hurts!!!!!

[SAYED THANGAL]

I value your opinion, thanks

[Vidya Bacchus]

Indeed when we are born our souls are so good and pure until our choices and actions turns it to black sometimes.Well penned.

[SAYED THANGAL]

thanks vidya for your encouraging words

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome sayed.