i'm doing fine

i'm doing fine

A Poem by Daisy Ackerman
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A three-line poem.

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dash dash dash

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© 2016 Daisy Ackerman


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Unconscious communication is always intriguing. This is a fascinating piece Daisy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisy Ackerman

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your words.
I really like how this made me visualize the ellipses and the dashes which adds a whole other layer of emotional meaning to the poem. Great job! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Daisy Ackerman

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on January 24, 2016
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Daisy Ackerman
Daisy Ackerman

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Hi! I'm Daisy Ackerman and I'm a half-Chinese student and poet. I write free-form poetry based on emotions and slices of life and I experiment with subject matter, form, and style. Outside of poetry, .. more..

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