HAPPY

what is this thing called happy I`ve never been "happy" How Does It Feel? Wait What is Feeling? what is like to feel     to feel happyness to feel kindness to know you are alive Am i Alive am i alive Are You Alive What Dose alive Realy dose it mean your living LIFE does it mean you LIVE well if you live you are  EVIL that is what live tells you spell it back words that mus mean if you live life backwards your evil. so now tell me are you HAPPY?

Reviews

[deleted]

I absolutely like the concept of being happy and what is true happy. I even liked the way you asked what is happiness...spelled backwards it is evil. What I didn't care too much for was that there was a lot of grammatical errors. You spelled does a couple of tiems as dose. And then in another sentence you said evil is what live tells you...it should have been life. I think that if you take a little time and struture this poem/organize it, it could be a very nice read.

[Faith]

This was good, i never new live was evil spelled backwards, wow i feel stupid, hahaa. some commas are due in curtain areas, and i like how you put it all in a paragraph i have done that about twice [i think] i like the emotion you get out of it, it makes the write a lot more powerful because the reader gets the feeling that it is a somewhat 'journal' or list of flowing emotions.

overall, nicely done.

Faith

[Lunar Lightning]

This is not bad, but I recomend putting more lines on it in stead of making it all run like one paragraph rather than a poem.

Luna