Writing

I had to write this poem for one of my classes. I wanted some other views.

During the cool spring morning

From under a shady cedar tree

Despite the whipping winds

On top of a slim piece of white paper

Apart from any other mind, the words begin to pour

Along the lines round curving letters cover the page

Beyond the realms images and words are formed

Author's Note

Sorry for any spelling, my hands, keybord, and i are in a disagreement, right now

Reviews

[STAR CHILD]

this one makes you think and contemplate

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm beautifully simple...last word I would separate and change to "framed"...slimp is ok but hyphenate it to read" slightly- limp"...maybe?

[DontBlink158]

Thanks, ours just has to start with a preposition. There can be verbs.. ANd its not about Mimis tree, just a kind of tree that i like

[Just Me]

Wow sar.... I hope u realize there were several verbs in this right??? I thought it was good. Was the setting in Mimi's tree or under it???