Why cant you listen

WHY CANT YOU LISTEN?

 

Why can’t you listen?

Wrapped up in your own world

Too much to see I need you,

Just to listen, just for a moment.

Talk and try all day long,

But no you can’t listen or see

Why can’t you listen?

 

The days have been too long,

Too hard.

I don’t want to talk, I just need to think.

But pushing and poking

all at the wrong time.

Why can’t you see, why can’t you listen

I just want to be left in peace, just to be.

Why can’t you listen?

 

To the right, to the good,

And not to the bad.

Yes I’ve made mistakes,

 But you have too.

Can’t you look at the good?

The right.

And just leave the bad?

 

 

Author's Note

Sorry if you read this, i know this sucks, but i had to get something out.
I'll try to make it better, any comments are welcome. :)

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Fabulous poem!!!

[STAR CHILD]

this is good

[Ciara]

this doesnt suck ur soo good grl cant wait to see ya again

[Aurora Lynn]

I don't think this sucks at all. Very often we just need to write something down in a poem and it makes you feel better, if only a little bit. I wish that people could just, as you put it, SHUT UP AND LISTEN. Very well done poem.

~Aurora Lynn

[Just Me]

Wow..... That was a deep. Kinda reminds me of my mom and dad ;(