Shadow Kisses Haunt My Memories

LOOKING THROUGH THE HOUR GLASS.
STAR GAZING IN THE NIGHT.

REMEMBERING ALL THE TIMES WE NEVER HAD TO FIGHT.

IM SCREAMING OUT IN TORMENT.

YOUR SCREAMING OUT IN RAGE.

WE'RE SCREAMING LIKE TO FALLEN ANGELS TRAPPED INSIDE A CAGE.

IM STILL WONDERING THESE DREAMLESS MILES.

WHY DID THINGS HAVE TO CHANGE?

 

I REMEMBER ALL THOSE SHADOW KISSES.

DANCES IN THE NIGHT.

MEMORIES OF FORBIDEN LOVE.

SPELLBOUND LOOK ALL IN YOUR EYES.

IT COULDNT LAST FOREVER.

YOU LEFT ME A BUTTERFLY WITHOUT ITS WINGS.

NOW WE ARE LEFT SCREAMING IN FRUSTRATION.

WHY DO THINGS HAVE TO CHANGE?

 

DARKEST MERCY. GREATEST SIN.

I HATE TO LOVE YOU. YOU WILL NEVER WIN.

 

SHADOW KISSES HAUNT MY MEMORY.

SHADOW KISSES HAUNT MY MEMORY.

SHADOW KISSES FOREVER IN MY MEMORY.

Author's Note

please ignore grammer and tell me what you think!! thanks !

Reviews

[Euro]

Wow, this is good!
Others would like go crazy b/c the poem its written in Caps and they will say there is no need to shout but to me this is a great to actually take out all of those emotions and let the reader know how hurt the speaker is. I love the way this sounded, good work there!
Keep it up
-Penelope H.

[Tribute To Jadey]

This is an awesome write. Their is many, many emotions coming through in your words, and I could really feel the frustration.
One thing I say, is that in the first stanza, you've placed 'To', where it should be 'Two'...Sorry hun
I enjoyed this, and the tittle was grabbing. A brilliant poem, you have much talent. Well done

[Shadey Jadey]

The fact that you have written this all IN CAPS LOCK lets the reader know, and in a way, comprehend that the writter is in emoitional turmoil. Its GREAT!!!
Hahaha, great piece :) Xx