Rage turned to Rhyme ...

I hate males. No offense to anyone! :P

Your name in my memory
A sweet word on my lips
Turned sour as a lemon
When you said we should kiss
Not cause I didn't want to
Oh I was dying for a taste
But the pain that you caused me
Again and again kept me in haste

Your an arrogant jerk.
Not even my type
You treat me like dirt
I question you and we fight

But then you make me feel warm
Safe and sound
You can be so sweet when you keep your feet on the ground
The guy that I met was shy and so sweet
He was the cutest guy I thought I'd ever meet

Somehow I was attracted to you
I really don't no how
For the first time we dates you left me for some cow
I thought I got over you
We just started being friends
So don't flirt and be cute with me
I'm not here for loose ends
Don't tell me you love her
Then say pretty words to me
Hurt me and you will feel as much pain
As stepping on 1000 bees

Your name in my memory
A sweet word on my lips
Turned sour as a lemon
When you said we should kiss
And as you see some of the reasons
My friends my foe
I promise not to date him
no never at all
I don't no how
my rage began to rhyme
But I hope you enjoyed it
Thankyou and goodbye!

Author's Note

Everyone! When your angry! Start to rhyme. It is the weirdest thing ever but you feel like laughing at your stupidity at the end! xP you no the drill by now. Ignore grammar and spelling. :) please review! :D

Reviews

[Lupus Kaos]

You're good, it seems, when you're angry. And it is nice. I liked the poem, though a male and I smiled at the end. Rhymes, rhymes, anger, rhymes...it comes down to feelings, so, it is nice. I think I should be nicer the next time I date someone and hopefully I won't make her angry- as you were here-in order to not receive anything mean. But :) he got what he deserved. Bravo!

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thanks :D

[Natasha]

Really good love :) Hooray for inspirational angst! :D lol

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

I'm going to kill you so brutally :P

[Natasha]

^_^

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Your so mean

[The Nude Writer]

OMG I have noticed the same thing about angry rhyming. Dont be so hard on males.. They don't know any better =P again good job putting your heart into this one. It was very well written :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

I guess haha XD thanks again :)

[gabrielle]

what a beautiful way to express rage. I enjoyed reading this. i particularly like the ending.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thank you ^^

[The Bass Player]

Amazing. I think this should be given to anyone with a angry heart to read and let them smile.

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Thankyou :D I"m glad it cheers people up ^^