Black Cross

Have you ever felt a nightmare brewing your black blood?

Have you ever felt the darkness?- no escaping from.

Claustrophobia is creeping in.

Don’t judge me- you don’t know where I’ve been.

Do you have a living hell?

 

 

Draw a black cross on my heart tonight.

No-one is taking residence tonight.

Lash and claw until these chains break free.

The animal hidden deep down.

Has broken out.

 

Have you ever been so frightened?- frightened of yourself?

Have you ever felt so lonely?- no-one is there to help

Have you ever felt dissatisfied?

Hunger blazing into the night.

Ever had the urge to kill?

 

Draw a black cross on my heart tonight

No-one is taking residence tonight

Lash and claw until these chains break free

The animal hidden deep down

Has broken out

 

Its like the embodiment of Satan arrived at your door

Bubbling emotions spill

What are you waiting for?

 

Black crosses on our hearts

No-one is taking residence to night

 

Draw a black cross on my heart tonight

No-one is taking residence tonight

Lash and claw until these chains break free

The animal hidden deep down

Has broken out

Author's Note

I need help.. XD Enjoy ^^

Reviews

[Magnolia Liberato]

I'm also still in high school :P, and I'm a poetry afficionado, so I couldn't resist reading your poetry. I just have to say: this is an AMAZING poem. The feeling behind it and the imagery is both alluring and scary, but I loved it! It was dark, but a good read, and I can't wait to read more of your poetry! :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

hehe thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
Its nice to meet another fellow poetry nerd who isnt 18+ :P

[Rob Santana]

Killer poem!! dark and raw. My kinda of writing. I really like the title you chose. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Kate Henderson]

Wow! No hyperbole - this is seriously good. Fantastic imagery with meaning. A very good read, keep writing!

[Shadey Jadey]

Wow, Wow, Wow!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT :D :D
The last three stanzas are my favourtie parts, anything with Satan, you know im down, lol. A wonderfully written blacked out awesome poem you've got here bub. Nice one :) Xxx

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

Hehe thank you :3