Guilt

I will break you down

        and beat you

Until your mind falls apart

I will watch you suffer

and feel nothing

Don't mind me

I'm just here

Watching your pain

Like no other 

But I will break you down

        and beat you 

Until your mind falls apart

I will watch you suffer 

I will have no remorse 

For those who don't deserve it

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Guilt, worthless as it seems, serves a pretty decent weapon crafted to inflict severe blows. I feel the indifference of your intellect, not apathy, but more of a feeling striving for retribution. Well done, well penned, well spoken.

[kublakhan27]

Powerful...this one really cuts to the bone. Well done Kristin.

[Keith LaFountaine]

An intense amount of emotion in this. Excellent work. Very powerful, with wonderful imagery.

[Frieda P]

Guilt such a useless emotion, yet we all do it, you've pen'd it quite nicely Kristin.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Is this a form of bullying or self-abuse or what?

[Kristin]

Writing depends on what the reader perceives :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

True but sometimes the author will throw a poor dog a bone. :)

[Ees]

Not much beats as well and thoroughly as guilt does. Guilt eats more than what others can do. Great poem. Great reminder. Spoken truth.
nice job!