Worldly

Worldly

A Poem by Kristin

It is not the brightness
Of the sun
Nor is it the light 
Of the room
That makes the flowers bloom
Makes my skin so warm
It is not the cold of the ice
Nor the rush of the wind
That shakes my nerves
Rises the bumps on my skin
It is not the moon 
Who pulls my tides apart
Or the ocean I am drowning in
Not the forests I get lost in
Or the mountains that take my breath away
Nothing, not even the world
Can do something like this.

© 2014 Kristin


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I can't help but feel this to be the profound effects of love hanging from your heart like an anchor that keeps you afloat in the storm yet drowns you when the tides come up. Perhaps not love, rather, friendship or perhaps familial love. Regardless, you portray its effects on you in such an exuberant manner. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


good job kristin...nice write..

Posted 6 Years Ago


that was very well done ;) good job

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 20, 2014
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Tags: writing, poetry, sad, love, lost, stupid, bones, life, body, personality, pain, death, rebellion, teens

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Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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