I'm Just a Rock

I'm Just a Rock

A Poem by Kristin

Pick me up
Throw me down
Watch me break in little pieces
Watch me blowup 
And move from town to town
My importance in size decreases
I’m a rock to keep you there
Something simple to keep you sane
But easily forgotten
I stay to keep from your despair
But can bother you as much as a stain
Throw me in water to see how many ripples you could have gotten
Im just a rock
Nothing important
With not much of a function
Trampled by everyone who takes a walk
Some say its inadvertent
I hope you all feel a certain compunction

© 2012 Kristin


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Kristin
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The fact that you relate yourself to a rock is creative, it can be a peaceful method of releasing emotions, calming some forms of stress even; but it is often overlooked as a useless item. Great job, and the ending was nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great job with the rock theme, amazing, lovely imagery! You may (if you wish) want to work on the amount of syllables per line to help a little with the flow. I love your use of vocabulary, awesome poem. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on June 23, 2012
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Kristin

Atlanta, GA



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