forgive meA Poem by heylelDo you remember that final fight and how you spat blood, kept spitting blood,like you were a viper and it was your venom?
There’s a serpent in you, I know that now, But it’s hard to forget how you fell in the end. How your once-comforting hands reached out with so much fear they shook, and how they were not answered.
If you had given me more time I would have fallen with you. Maybe that’s why you slipped away, and how, like our hearts, The trembling in your fingers stopped. © 2015 heylelAuthor's Note
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6 Reviews Added on November 16, 2015 Last Updated on November 16, 2015 Tags: falling, loss, grief, fallen, forgiveness, novice poetry, new, novice AuthorheylelAustraliaAboutWelcome to paradise, friends! My name is Eli, and I'm an aspiring author/poet. I will try my best to post here as often as I can. Feedback is greatly appreciated! more..Writing
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