together forever , never apart

when my friends tried to cheer me up i attempted to force a smile 

then something came to me . . .

they were here all the while

their shoulders to cry on , until my eyes were clear enough to see

to see their loyalty

their jokes, laughs and love

thats what meant the world to me

nothing is priced above

in the highest value

they are my heart and soul

i depend on them

without them i am not whole

when they helped me put back together

my jig-saw puzzle of a heart

that reassured me that we'll be together forever, never apart

Author's Note

ignore grammar , punct. , etc.

Reviews

[JoJo Q. Finsburry]

Heartfelt, beautiful. The only thing i would say about it is, the thought flow is a little choppy, only a little, the heart behind it more than makes up for that though.

[iamkim]

wow! this is a wonderful poem for friendship :)