Carcasses of Memories

Carcasses of Memories

A Poem by Thao
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A ghost of me. (A poem for Halloween)

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The whispers of the wind blew through her quintessence.
With faintly shut eyes, she embraced the plush exultation that enveloped her.
As her delicate form twirled with the wind, a sigh escaped her soft lips.
The smile etched upon her face signified it all.


Now her shimmering figure takes light steps towards her new form.
There was not even a remnant of hazy light radiated from it.
The girl wonders if this is truly what she succumbs to - a leftover so similar to that of a carcass.
Frozen still was the body, lamented eyes drilling back at her.


I stare at the ghastly girl. I blink. She flickers.
Her head was tilted in questioning, and her eyes refused to leave mine.
A shadow she is, but were shadows designed to give off such glow?
It does not matter.
She is dead now, and so are the memories.
Dead, dead, dead.

© 2023 Thao


Author's Note

Thao
Would really appreciate advice on wording, etc.! And it'd be great to hear your interpretation, so I know if I got my meaning across or just to hear what can be made out of this poem!

I got the image from this website: https://weheartit.com/entry/355366316
However, I do not know if that is the original source material for it.

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Added on October 31, 2023
Last Updated on October 31, 2023
Tags: Ghosts, time, memories, Halloween

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Hoping to get into poetry. I am a beginner, so I'm still trying to find out which platforms I enjoy! I am also still trying to see which writing style suits me best! You can also find me on All Poe.. more..

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