T-Shirt

T-Shirt

A Poem by Steely
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Erm... this is a random poem about a t-shirt xD

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I have a white t-shirt

With a logo on the front

Reading 'Go Pittsburgh Penguins

You're still Number One'

I have a white t-shirt

With paint spots on the rim

From flicking purple paint

And gettin' flicked back by him

I have a white t-shirt

With blood on the sleeves

From that time I tripped

Scraped my elbow and both knees

Yeah, I have a white t-shirt

That brings back memories

And I can't believe

That I wore it since I was three

© 2009 Steely


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Steely
Erm... random XD

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Fuunnnyyy... heh heh

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hi

I love it. The repitition is great, draws you in. It is good you didnt name the person (him), leaving it ambiguous means the imagination takes over. I just love its simplicity and heart!

Kevin x

Posted 14 Years Ago


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HAHA! Random but cute! Great poem about memories and cherishing something as simple as a white t-shirt. Very cute! :)

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Added on August 1, 2009

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Steely
Steely

Ontario, Canada



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