[untitled]

for it is love that binds us,

it is truth that hides us.

deep thoughts of intimacy,

but boundries keep me from thee..

i've fallen into a pit and your at the bottom,

a new light shines through, God's love is upon us.

 

Author's Note

uhmm i justtttt made it off the top of head :D
its probably horrible lol

Reviews

[Abd-afeez]

Though short but a message is delivered. I don't know why you prefer not to give it a titled. This would have been a better pointer. It is a good piece but i see one mistake. In the line
I've fallen into a pit and YOUR at the bottom. That ought to be you.
It is good job anyway because it expresses your thought.

[Hello, Goodbye]

its probably terrific..

I can only fathom what you would come up with if you thunk and then crafted and then wrote.. you should do it..

Dont let this be your last poem.. your a natural kid.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a good poem. I like the ending. Confusion led to the safety of God's light.
Coyote