When Reflections pause in Time

When Reflections pause in Time

A Poem by KAREN
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When true love falls apart!

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Secrets collect dust
between broken lies
found hidden in dreams
of poetic beauty,
and warmth slowly dies.
Notes frozen in time
are from quiet memories
shedding tears.

Angelic obstacles dance
along shadows resembling
artistry that transforms into 
speechless affection. 
Loneliness erase voices,
and unravels seeds,
and plants a path to
nowhere.

A distant heart
sings solitude
when pain captures
the only breath taken.
Ecstasy aches for
another glimpse
of a silent voice,
echoing against a
tender touch.

Yesterday's reflection pauses as
tomorrow's reflection bleeds
for a shade of true love,
and today's reflections die
entwined in regret,
and time stands still.




© 2022 KAREN


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KAREN
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Reflections... Phantoms of what is, was, and may never be. These are the ideas that float through my head here.
Memories as spectres of a past that refuses to die. This haunted, we move on in halting steps at best.
Well written. The perfect portrait of a heart grieving for what can no longer be.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
I love that last stanza, this write says a lot, emotional well written write

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
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I'm a " no point crying over spilled milk" kinda guy so have always very quickly moved on from broken relationships, will be celebrating 29 years wed in October...I'm a very lucky man.
Enjoyed you well written, reflective poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by!
A lot of imagery and feeling in this one. I don't mean to be picky, but how can tomorrow have a reflection if it hasn't happened yet?

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the read! Good question! I guess one can dream of the reflections of tomorrow.
Wonderful poem!
"A distant heart / sings solitude" - Love the use of personification throughout your poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
I do like it. Your words reflect regret and desires that are lost without the hope of coming to fruition. The touch of a lover lingers like stars in the sky. You can see them, but they're too far away to be reached any longer.

A well written poem, Imagination. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! I'm Storiestotell not Imagination101
Relic

2 Years Ago

My bad. There's another writer on another site with the same avatar.
KAREN

2 Years Ago

It's okay! Thanks for the read! Imagination101 is on this site! I think you meant to read her.
From the title on, this poem is full of many reflections. Stream of thoughts meander and focus on this and that. I see you write about relationships gone North to South. Marvelous.

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the awesome review!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
"A distant heart
sings solitude
when pain captures
the only breath taken."

Posted 2 Years Ago


KAREN

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the read dear poet!
"Angelic obstacles dance
along shadows resembling"

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2022
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Tags: Mirror, Reflections, Secrets, Love, Time

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KAREN
KAREN

Harrisville, MS



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