I Love The way

love being expressed btween a couple!

I love the way we take moon light walks,

and have very long talks.

 

I love the way you tell me you love me very much,

and say mushy words and such.

 

I love the way you look so neat,

and so very sweet.

 

I love the way we walk hand in hand,

and sometimes we don't walk we just stand.

 

I love the way you kiss my lips,

and wrap your arms around my hips.

 

I love you so very much.

I hope I show you with every touch.

 

And by the way,

I'll love you each and everyday!

Author's Note

Another try at poem writing! May be corny but here it is!!

Reviews

[Neville]

It is kinda special and lovely and ... you have certainly captured the sheer joy of experiencing precisely what you say these words are all about .................. I would never have guessed these words were first posted almost twelve years ago .. they seem to me young, vibrant and timeless .. like young love, I guess .. N :)

[KAREN]

Thank you! Just was starting out writing poetry.

[Chris Shaw]

Cute sentiment. Love is sweeter than sugar and far better for you :))

Chris

[KAREN]

Thank Chris, very old poem.

[William Michael Reeves]

Kind of, but the couplets about couples cups the emotion by the cupful...of creamed corn!

[KAREN]

Another old poem! I was just starting out. Thanks for reading!

[InkSlinger]

Cute.. wasn't all that corny, more sweetened in sentiment.. Reminds me of greeting card sentiments.. Keep working it.. you are just about there..

[Olivia Ashley]

This is amazinng you are truly talented!!

[Cherrie]

corny goes great with a box of choclates I loved it

[Goodbye]

Corny yes, but very sweet and I could totally see it in a greeting card. Very good job!

[Lydia Blackwell]

Corny- yes- but who cares? I really like it. I have someone that I feel exactly like this about and I so I can totally relate. It's real. It is meaningful and positive. I like how at the end, you are compelled to give back. It shows you are not selfish.

[youngwriter222]

Not corny! You are a great poetry writer. This poem is cute :)