Into The Night

Into The Night

A Poem by storiestotell

Two lovers that has to wait until night to be together!


I sit in awe,

staring into space.

Your marvelous beauty

takes my breath away.


Strawberry red hair,

blowing in the wind.

Sparks of moon light,

making you glow.


Your porcelain skin,

and slender body

is so prefectly put together.

I want to hold you

and never let you go.


I spread the blanket out,

lay you down carefully.

I contemplate on my next move,

not wanting to scare you away.


My lips spreads into a smile.

I kiss you deeply,

tasting the sweetness of you.

We bellow out in unison,

our hunger being fed.


The crickets plays a melody.

We dance around in the darkness,

our arms tightly  around each other.


I see a shooting star,

closing my eyes I make a wish.

I wish you would bite my neck,

but you refuse to bring me into your world.


My beautiful vampire,

if only nights could last forever.



© 2010 storiestotell

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I find vampire themes confusing. I just imagine Vincent Price grinning and his vampires pouting fake blood. I think Bram Stoker and his characters would be bemused by the modern concept of his toothy girls. Bring back Vlad the Impaler! It was so simple in his day!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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A nicely written poem with delightful reflections!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Lovely write. :) Beautiful language in your descriptions.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wasn't expecting the ending..LOL!
Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love different..I seem to have a vampire fetish..shhh dont tell anyone..
Lovely write, wanting to become a part of the others life...knowing it isnt so glamerous..has to be love!...

Posted 8 Years Ago

i love this. good description. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Holy cow! It's like you almost used the same ''optical illusion'' approach as your sister In her poem ''Beautiful Lady''! I would'nt have guessed that either of the subjects at hand were vampires! This is very clever, and captivatingly written from start to finish!


Posted 8 Years Ago

i can really picture this in my head great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's interesting. I had no clue it was about a vampire until you said it was.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A surprise ending to the poem. Had desire, great description and then a wish to become a vampire. A very interesting poem. A excellent poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on December 14, 2010
Last Updated on December 14, 2010
Tags: night, moon, beautiful, body



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