Modern Definition

Their lives together!

He brings her breakfast in bed,

whimsical impulse amazes her.

Wistful thoughts dance in his head,

he's never negative.

Laughter escapes her lips at his witty humor.

Wizard smart, good with his hands.

Love making is powerful.

She has her modern definition of him,

He's her everything, all she needs.

 

Sensational looks,

sandy hair silky smooth.

Deep ocean blue eyes,

and dimples appear when he smiles.

His sensitive side is so sweet.

personality that shimmers.

Steadfast dreams he'll make come true.

She has her modern definition of him,

always likeable and loveable.

 

His life is perfection, he works hard.

Plentiful supply of all she needs.

She's so happy to have the pleasure

of him as her husband..

He's positive, magnets is what

they'll be, never apart.

She has her modern definition of him,

togetherness is what he's about.

 

His love is dependable, never fake.

He still takes her on dates.

Daring is his middle name.

His words is so descriptive,

full of magic.

She has her modern definition of him,

Fairy tale life, he's so surreal.

 

Daily their love grows,

In sickness and health.

Choices they'll make together.

Today and always they'll be in love.

Isn't their lives perfect?

Only eyes for one another.

Nobody will come between them,

As many will try.

Real love stays strong.

Yes, their love is real.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[jkhatz]

There are a couple of typos: 'theres is' and 'is' instead of 'are'. Outside of those, the poem flows well with a sweet surrender toward a perfect love - a fantasy put to eloquent verse.

[Stef Outsiders]

Aww I loved the last part, there is real love but its hard to come by...
Love it all though! well done...

[Gone]

He doesn't exist! Except in the imaginations of women. lol Nice to know how far I am from perfection though! :(

Seriously though, I enjoyed reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of wisdom in the poem. When we forget to appreciate mate in our life. Walls can fall in. A wise person does their best to keep number two content and happy. A excellent poem. A lot of good advice in the poem.
Coyote

[Magdelena]

I think it's great! And wow! I know there is love like this out there. Your words make it sound so beautiful and surreal.. Great imagery!

Hugs
Mags xx