Sound Of Memories

Written for the creative poetry group!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tape player of mind on

Listens to cosmos memories

Breathe in, breathe out

Astral projection takes place

 

Crepitate fire hums

Warm music soothes

Aalpenglow lights the sky

Gentle wind blows across skin

Channel of love murmurs

 

Sound reflection of laughter

Recollection of a touch

Cohesive bodies join as one

Satire voices turn to impish play

 

Lips suck sweet nectar

Soft melody flow of his heart

Peaceful whisper of his poetic voice

Esoteric allusions are pasted in her mind

 

Hands sweep across delicate skin

Distinctive sound of aspiration

Resonance cries pull them closer

 

Their habitual love comes to an end

Memories fall asleep

And profound silence takes over

They breathe in, they breathe out

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mary Fioratti]

What a calming poem... I read it and I felt like a light over me, and a peace coming from nowhere. I really got the magic of this moment that you described. A time to collect memories, and get in touch with our soul.
Beautiful!
*Mary*

A very beautiful form of giving a poetic meditation, tantric elements with almost ... the desire to postpone is making it ultimately much nicer, platonic love in the movement of breath. Breathtaking for some new other oxygen... to continue, into the circle of all...

[Valentine]

I find turning it all over to my Maker does the same thing..Kathie

[Star Wolf]

Wow, this is awesome! It's brilliant what you did with the required words. Its tender and romantic. Love it!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Outstanding romantic poem. I think you did a wonderful job on this, I really do.

[Poetic Beauty]

this is erotic and sensual. The art of showing love in the most complete form possible. Detailed and beautiful. Astral Projection in the greatest form.

[Cassie Fraga]

oh oh oh... that is a touching piece... can relate to it on so many different levels!
great read!!

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Now Im relaxed, haha
This was so wonderful and wonderfully penned
It even gives the reader that meditative and serene feeling.
Very well written

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A meditative and serene feeling when reading this, which seems to be what this is suppose to be about. You conveyed the feelings within meditation nicely. Very well written.

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I loved every bit of this, but the last stanza is BEAUTIFUL. Awesome job.