Timeless Thoughts Beckon

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Restless nights merge with timeless thoughts.

Nature sounds give their hypnotic rhythm,

but sleep wanders around in darkness.

Me, myself and I ensembles in perfect harmony

of a life that is going no where.

 

Choral voices send out stress covered tears.

Questions does a performance in the depts of my mind, and fear savors the collection of timeless thoughts.

Sounds of the past blend with confusion of the present, the future drowns with every blink of an eye.

 

Reflections of me are strangers  staring back.

Timeless thoughts carry me into windows of no where.

Bright patterns in different textures are paths

shadowing my direction to deliverance.

 

Unorganized facts of life gather like dust,

and settles on every shelf of my heart.

Solutions seep away from reach.

Photos of what I  wish to be develop and teases what I am.

 

Timeless thoughts beckon,

a journey on self discovery,

luring me to an understanding,

Just to be me, myself and I.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Time, it can be the enemy or friend, just depends on where we are at in our life. Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this a lot!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A wonderful write. The journey of self-discovery, fascinating and scary.

[?]

A very thought provoking write, loved the imagery.
The ending was excellent

[Raven Starhawk]

Time can be a ugly foe. This was a great piece with a massive amount of everything to build it strongly. It has character that guides itself.

[Coyote Poetry]

We can play many parts in a life. Best to be like you said in the ending of the poem.
"Timeless thoughts beckon,
a journey on self discovery,
luring me to an understanding,
Just to be me, myself and I."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The word play you have is something that I admire soooo much...
ANother mesmeric piece :)