help me

help me

A Poem by StormyDixie

Lord help me
in this time of distress
this time of need

anger
frustrations
fear

it runs through my veins

lord help me
in this time of distress
in this time of need

wonder
cowardice
weakness

it over powers my body

Lord help me
in this time of distress
in this time of need

© 2014 StormyDixie


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StormyDixie
just a rough draft!! critique please!!

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this time of distress and need, sounds like you need company for one thing, hopefully when the day is bright tomorrow, even if the weather is cold where you are, there will be much you can do, this holidays so stressful

Posted 9 Years Ago



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