beautiful world

beautiful world

A Poem by strange_gurl

having a mother who stays up all night praying for me

a father who always resolve my problems even without me asking for his help

a younger sister who lights up the house with her laughter

 

a lover who counts the hours till i come back home from an exhausting day at work

sharing my pains and my happiness

each time she says ''i love you'' it renews my life

 

friends who wakes my childhood in my present

they hold on my hand and take my to the swings,we play and play till we get so tired and lay down on that green grass

 

it's bed time,i switch the lights off,put my head on the pillow and sleep peacefuly knowing that there is always tomorrow

 

© 2008 strange_gurl


Author's Note

strange_gurl
ignore the grammar

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yes...there is always tomorrow...I often wonder if I'll see another...life is so uncertain

Posted 11 Years Ago


there's something that I connect with, with your writing here, the language and voice is clear and concise..love the detail and i just wanted to thank you so much for review my writing...it's been awhile since I posted so I appreciate it greatly!!

Thank you~~~

Leesah

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is the most peacefully happy poem I've read on WritersCafe! It's very heartfelt but doesnt suffer from sappyness like most poetry from the heart

Posted 12 Years Ago


I found this a rather powerful poem. Beautifully written

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very bright and light poem without being sappy. It's very nice to read something heartwarming as this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i'm glad sleep comes to you in that form....dream peacefully~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very positive poem. I really enjoyed it. It is amazing that you can put your life and relationships into perspective like that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice poem.. keep it up gurl.. can't wait for ur next work :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


indeed a good poem! The ability to put things into perspective every day is a gift not all are given. thanks for putting the good energy out there. B

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2008

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strange_gurl
strange_gurl

sheffield, United Kingdom



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hello..my name is Tara,am 20yrs old,i live in uk in sheffield... i've always loved to write,and i got so happy when i saw this site which i can publish my stories,i know my grammar is not perfect but .. more..

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