Fear Forever

Fear Forever

A Poem by Liv
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A personal poem I wrote when I realized what I fear most.

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I fear forever
an everlasting promise,
because who am I
if I cannot
keep it?

I fear forever
the colliding of sides,
because who am I
if I cannot 
stop them?

I fear forever
an internal conflict,
because who am I 
if I cannot 
do either?

© 2015 Liv


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Liv
Just opinions and critiques, please

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I do feel like this a lot of time
''I fear forever
An internal conflict
Because who am I''
Sometimes people aren't going to like your style of how you are
My grandma told me once: ''Lizardo, Don't pay atention if they tell you something bad about you.
You are not a gold coing to be happy with everybody
Excellent piece

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 12, 2015
Last Updated on January 12, 2015
Tags: fear, realization, epiphany, inspiration, commitment, conflict, apology, question, self doubt

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Liv
Liv

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I love to write, and I think I'm pretty good at it, so that's why I'm here. I play piano and I'm learning guitar, I read quite a bit, and I watch a tad more T.V. than I should. I'm hoping that join.. more..

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