Cinderella

Cinderella

A Poem by Holly
"

....nevermind.

"

How dare the silent screams

wake me from my dreams

such a story

what a waste

an end that's so misplaced

my perfect carriage

turned to black

my white horse men

now I lack

both glass slippers

are on my feet

my Prince Charming couldn't wait on me

now the feeling

unsurpressed

can't evade me

takes my rest

sleepless now for three whole months

I long for a different storybook

 is there any opening

to be a different me

am I Cinderella

or am I the ugly

the princess

without the happy ending

© 2009 Holly


Author's Note

Holly
I am aware this poem sucks, but maybe with your advice I may be able fix that. Positive thinking. Always the way to go.. *laughs and scoffs* Scratch that last thing, but seriously it would be awesome for you to help me!

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I didn't think it was bad. Just one or two spelling errors that I noticed.

Oh yeah- Is there a real Pirnce Charming? Or was he just "part of your imagination." heheh





Posted 14 Years Ago



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