INSPIRATIONAL WOMAN

Written for a contest

Softly the light carefully reflects off her ivory skin.

Squinting, I blink quickly, feeling her energy pressing

vigorously, continuously against my chest.

My spine twitches, heart palpitates, knees brace

 

Blood rushes southward like marching soldiers.

Draining me of all conscious, cognitive thoughts.

I am an empty vessel from the impact of her beauty.

Her words fill me to the brim of all creativity.

 

My soul rises up into my throat, I choke back

unspoken words of love and insatiable desires.

Tongue tied, I mustard up a deep groan from

down within my paralyzed, hypnotized body.

 

I am a blank canvas with a pen in hand I scribe

spiritual words that flow from me like the wind

gushing on the dawn of sweet summers end.

Written words composed from a humbled man.

 

My poetry is created from the breath of women.

Inspiration derived directly from her beauty.

Topics conceived from her wit and charm.

Writers block exists in her absence in life.

Author's Note

I also wonders what inspires you to write? For me it is simple and oh so true!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Woman make us rise and fall everyday in a life. Those beautiful woman with eyes that can take us down so quickly. Poem is outstanding. Your description and words held my attention to the last word. A pleasure to read your poetry.
Coyote

[TV]

This kind of feeling is rare, even on this site. Feelings in a heart this full definitely needs to be shared. Wonderful writing...

[Poetic Drugs]

Wow! Very inspirational and you have great syntax- I also am very inspired by woman and the beauty and power that we carry within...

[Alicia Beavis]

Beautiful diction and lovely sentiments portrayed in this piece. Wonderfully done!

[ZaZa]

This was beautiful. You expressed this poem with such passion it kept me reading until I had nothing else to read. I felt a smile come upon my face as I read and it's still on, haha. I must say, this woman is very lucky to have you writing like this about her. Amazing.

[Ladysue]

Beautifully expressed. Filled with passion...

[Stacey Watts]

This was a very beautiful well written piece. You pulled the emotion into this one and it was very passionate. Excellent job on this one.

[Goddisia]

Only a poet... so happy to found a writer like you!

[Luna]

This is amazing. Like I have said before, you must love this woman very much. This is an amazing write up. It flows perfectly and I love how you use her as your inspiration.

[deeps]

Wow! This is quite the write here.
Amazing!