A Secret Journey

A Secret Journey

A Poem by Sue
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Sting's music inspired this...it is also published in a Forward Press Southern Anthology 2008....

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I took to flight one starlit night

Silvery winged and clothed in black

Going on a secret journey

Don’t know when I’m coming back

 

No one sees as I glide through the air

Flying through the star-glazed skies

I’ve passed stars Mars and Venus

A flock of doves has just flown by

 

I’m looking for a secret land

That lies far beyond the sun

Going to visit the house of a holy man

Before my journey’s done

 

A golden city rose into sight

But the wind blew it away

It was just a dream a beautiful dream

As I woke to the blaze of day

 

Last night I took to flight

Silvery winged and clothed in black

Went on a secret journey

Wish I hadn’t had to come back

 

(Inspired by a song called ‘Secret Journey’ by Sting)

 

 

 

 

© 2015 Sue


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Beautiful poem! Dreams are our subconscious thoughts manifesting themselves into beautiful images, apt that this is what you have done here with your words, Sue. Really nice flow to this one and well penned too, well done!
Helen

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Sue

10 Years Ago

Thanks Helen :)

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Added on August 16, 2013
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Sue

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