With You!

With You!

A Poem by Xena the soon to be 9th grader
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Love..Hope....Care...Grateful....Passion.....NEW LIFE....NEW YOU....THANK YOU!

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I was like a song so out of key
Then you came and gave my soul a melody!
Thanks to you for pulling me through
I've always lost but now I win with you.
I was always dark but now I shine with you!
I was always blind but now I see through you!
I was always dead, but now I live.......I LIVE in YOU!!
My soul, my pride..Forever will you be the apple of these eyes!

© 2013 Xena the soon to be 9th grader


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Is this written for "SquinklaPsyOps" on here?! Beautiful picture with a beautiful poem to match. : ) It reads as if you are writing to your girlfriend and I never remember that even though you are in the 8th grade "probably for about the last two years since I have seen your name on here...lol" that it could be a romantic friendship or even sexual one. Hard to picture when reading "soon to be 9th grader", but it does not take away from writing a pretty tribute like this. : ) xoxo

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Added on June 25, 2013
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Xena the soon to be 9th grader
Xena the soon to be 9th grader

Baltimore, MD



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Hi my name is Xena. I just graduated the 8th grade and I am definitely looking forward to highschool. Just like one of the writers on here said, you should take that magic carpet and let it lead you t.. more..

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