Desperate For You

A Poem by stars are far

What was my mistake?

What have I done to you?

Why did you leave me?

Don’t you know that you are

My life my breath and my soul?

Don’t you know that im here

Just to be yours ,just to love you…?

Why did you do this to me?

Don’t you know I'm here alone?

Desperate for you ..not for love

But your love… your love …

Why don’t you be one of those

Secret admirers that message me?

And give it a shot to see my faith

My faith in you and in our love..

It seems to be crazy for me

And im sure to everyone else

But I love you ..i love YOU ..I LOVE YOU

Please ..come back to me ..

© 2014 stars are far

Author's Note

It's not my style of writing..its just a random thing that came to me...
Thank you for you time

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MsJewel

I usually don't like questions in poetry, but this really works here...I could feel the pain and the longing in your words. Sad and heartfelt - you have written a beautiful poem.

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much..and well when you have an un-answered stuff in your mind that hurt you really .. read more

ur_ginger_girl

this is really good, usually the best works come to you at random.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

yeah .,.thank you so much for you time :)

Krista Gallant

Absolutely breathtaking. Thanks for sharing :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thank toy so much :)

cycy

you should do like a diary entry sort of thing, like one of those dear diary styles of writing, not sure what it's called exactly, that's the feel i get from your work, raw emotions and true feelings, you could make it kinda like a story or something of the sort, and i like the poem dear, i think you just put it all in there :)