Allow Me

Allow me..

Will you please let me kiss those hands

That hold the sun and moon with no stands.

Will you please let me touch those hands

That make me the make me be like sand.

Allow me please to bow on my knees

I won't bother you, I will be a breeze.

Allow me to gaze at those eyes

That make me forget what are rhymes.

Let me protect you from every storm

And make your eyes my best form .

Baby..allow me to kiss your hands

And I promise, you will be all my plans.

I love you honey 

Author's Note

I dunno what i can call this..
Maybe just a thought that hit me..of kissing his hands !

Reviews

[don't know]

allow me...
to tell you that this is very heart warming poem. i like the stanza "Will you please let me kiss those hands
That hold the sun and moon with no stands"

[stars are far]

Thank you very much..
Im glad you liked it ,means alot to me :)

[don't know]

your welcome. :)

[Raven Madd]

You express your feelings very well with descriptive wording that is concise and appropriate for each situation you use it for. I love reading your works, they make me feel.

[stars are far]

thank you very much :)

[Ankit Kumar]

Short and precise...wondered if it could have gone longer... :)

[stars are far]

Thank you :)