What I Wish For .

I was so lucky at that time when you and I 

Were called to be together by the Gods with no lie.

I was so amazing when you set me between your arms

And held me all the times with every cries.

 

But now all what I wish for is a sweet kiss

where your lips dive into mine with no plan like that of a chess.

I wish for a hug like the one I miss

That make me forget every stress.

 

I was so lucky to have you once 

But now that I've lost you and I have no chance.

All I can do is to wish and keep wishing

But I will never be like that fish you keep fishing.

 

I wish you the best of life in this world 

I know that you won't read my word, 

But I still wish you everything I could wish 

For someone who treated me like a fish .

Author's Note

I know its not good, but that just came to my mind.
so enjoy it

Reviews

[Kasey Miriam]

Perhaps it's not your best technique wise but it's full of heart and that's what really counts in a poem like this. Well done

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel like this could be split into two different poems...the first part in bold would make a good poem on its own.

[stars are far]

The bold lines are a pic from google , the poem is the other part..
thank you so much :)

[Tai Ryens]

It's a very kind way to treat someone who has scorned you, I commend you for having the strength to give such kind treatment. Well done.

[Leslie Philibert]

It is good, maybe the second line should read
Were called to be together by the gods with no lies..

[wordman]

I understand perfectly I have been there and you wrote your emotions

[Einstein Noodle]

your expression is very very raw .. not good nor bad .. so heart felt .. tears my flesh just reading .. very obvious this is about your own experience .. you are not a victim ... do not be a victim ... that is advice i would give my daughters ... you are not a victim .. when you find someone that treats you "in LOVE" you will say .. ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this is the way it is supposed to be :) i love your poem .. the editing aside .. it is the connection writers hope to make ..
E.

[AMMD]

in the second line, you mean "were" instead of "where". I've lived this poem; it's no fun =(

[Stephen]

You shouldn`t living the rest of your life in his memories. He`s your ex now ..which means, A Past and which should get burnt out into the ashes. Don`t live in misery because more you think about him ..about past, more you get dived into the pool of tears so, live with happiness ..walking with present instead of sitting in a corner of a room and cry. Just a suggestion! Anyway, it`s all depend on you!

In this poem, the only thing I find is your "Emotions" .. Stay blessed!

[stars are far]

Thank you so much ,and well you know I'm happy this way ,better than ever ,Its just some stuff that happened yesterday :/..thank you

[Stephen]

Your welcome .. And i`m very glad to know that your happy now and living your beautiful life with much happiness. May god keep you always happy! Take-care .. and i`m pleased to read your stuffs.