I Thought It was Real..

you told me you love me, then why did you leave ?

As you walk through the door and knock my heart down

You tell me I'm yours ,yesterday , forever and now.

 

My heart smiles and my body feel like it will freeze

I don't know what strike you given me, but I know it's away from grieve.

 

I had to smile, laugh and sometimes cry to deceive

The eyes of yours and make you come to my arms and give me a squeeze.

 

You told me the sweetest words in this whole big world 

I fell in your arms and hugged you in my mind, but teared instead.

 

Your smile broke the rocks and made my heart fly

Until you faded like a mirage in front of the eyes of I.

 

I screamed and shout and started to cry like ever

All of what I smiled for was a lie when I thought about forever.

 

All of the life that we built together was a lie

That made me laugh, smile and forever cry.

 

I thought for once you were real to me

I thought for once you can be a hero to me.

 

I just thought a lot and all what i thought of was a game

Even what you said was all your own way to make reach the flame.

Author's Note

I hope you like..
11:10 am. 21-7-2014

Reviews

[Ayushi]

I loved it. Every emotion and it's portrayal seems just perfect :)

[Diana Moon]

Interesting, a great poem to read

[ASHIDASH]

The poem is a lovely portrayal of a complicated emotion. I love this poem

[Tai Ryens]

The sudden method by which you describe his vanishing from your life exemplifies the feeling of the whole poem, the feeling of the world shattering in a millisecond and unexpectedly following his betrayal that had come so quick and sudden that you had no chance to prepare. Well done.

[wordman]

love is a complicated thing it puts you through all kinds of emotions

[Einstein Noodle]

these kinds of expressions are healing aren't they? .. i can't help but be a little distracted by language but it doesn't detract from what you are saying .. love and betrayal and loss transcends language and culture .. so well done says i
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