Never Again

you told me you loved me then why did you go ?

Fresh as your love, wild as your heart

I want to bleed in your soul with one start

A kiss can be an option or any other part

All what I want is to be one time in your heart.

 

As I see you in the corner, I run to you

I jump and you hold me just like we used to do

I kiss your neck then some lips meet

When people look around, just like we are odd.

 

I hold your face like its the first time I see your eyes

Your perfume is all over my body and your parts too.

As the sky cry when you push me off yourself

When I wake up from my day dream..

 

And I realize ....

 

You werent holding me or kissing me back

You were trying to make me away and off your jack,

I cried like hell when the sky tears fell over my cheek

people were waking me up from my panic attack..

 

I just though one time we can be back

As I swore from the billion time in my life

That this love will never ever start again,

I pick up whats left of my pride and walk away...

Author's Note

I feel like I'm facing writers block , this poem took me time more than any poem, though its not good, but I just dont want to feel like I cant write.. thats why I wrote it.l
thanks for your time.. 7:17 pm

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Lots of emotion here. Good visuals. I liked it.

[Colton Warr]

Painful and loving at the same time. Well done! Excellent emotion that is conveyed very well. Thanks for writing!

[Johanna]

Hi :) You just added me as a friend, and I went to check out your poem :) we´re even the same age so it´s my poetic duty ^^) and I´m glad I did! this got to me.. very true emotion, and the end was a great twist.. made it even better .I know hoe you feel about writersblock, so many of my poems I feel like are halfway there becuse I actually had writersblock, but it always help to post them anyway, you might be suprised when you read them again later :) Glad you wrote this! so good!

[ayesha gupta]

this one is realy nice poem.. i was about to cry. wierd dreams struck our mind and make us remind of what we have desired, that we dont have in reality.
too much agony in your words.

[Leslie Philibert]

Intensive write, nice love poem...

[debraj]

really...very emotional... great poem
... really i love this poem..... great job... :-)

[hardeep sabharwal]

intense and emotional love poem,, I like your expression :)

[MsJewel]

Not a bad poem at all...in fact I love the first line:
Fresh as your love, wild as your heart
There is something so sensual about the phrase "wild as your heart"....
Wonderful writing.

:) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

I don't feel like it's bad. It works, and has good rhythm. Put in the possessive apostrophe's to clean it up a bit.