Spellbound

 

Never try to explain his eyes, you will drawn

There, you will see treasures and islands

They are no blue just that killing brown

Where you can sense it's beauty from all far lands.

 

His eyes are the eternal angels that will never fade

They glow. They are fathomless. They are divine.

Like the power of God was exerted on his shade 

And He uttered his spell, to make me his, and make him mine.

 

With his hand tough that is like velvet sheets on silk

I fell over his chest and had his heart beating all over my soul.

Darkness was dominating the place, and wine tasted just like milk

All of that made my soul rebel, and my heart was out of control.

 

We were together and seraphs of heaven were watching us

Laughing, smiling, teasing, and making lots of love.

They were jealous. My angel have told me, that but made no fuss

That angel whispered in my ear to hold my prince and look for what's above.

 

We found those skies shinning for his eyes, and the stars going blind

We fell in love when the moon voiced his horn and said his word

I looked into my beloved eyes and drowned once more with no feelings to hide,

And at that moment i realized that the treasure you see were his own eyes.  

Author's Note

The title is suggested from a friend "moonskittles" thank you ,the title was "Him.His Eyes"
I once read that, when you fall in love with someones eyes, you will love them longer than any other love. I don't know to what extant is that true, but somehow it is.

Anways, I hope you enjoy this writing, since I haven't published for a while .

Reviews

[hardeep sabharwal]

A cute romantic poem,, I enjoyed this lovely work:)

[Einstein Noodle]

passionate and wanting in love .. the eyes get us every time .. of necessity it is only the one that braves to meet our gaze .. not looking away .. not doing that pathetic nervous dance .. and we are done for :)
i particularly like this one:
"...and the stars going blind"
E.

[stars are far]

Thank you so much my friend :)

[armin]

beautiful one, I enjoyed the read Suhad.

armin. ...

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a lovely romantic poem. I can't write these to save my life

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoyed this too, with just one idea to make it even better, to watch out for the line length in the last verses.

[wordman]

the eyes are the portal to the soul
a great write suhad

[R Smith]

well written Suhad, I remember a long time ago I was told if you want to know if you love someone truly you only have to answer one question, 'what's the colour of their eyes' its an easy thing to realize you don't know until the question arises :)

[stars are far]

That's a very easy question, and I still believe that eyes hides lots of untold words.
So I can guess that i truely love that person hehe :$ .
thank you Richard :)

[~]

I really enjoyed this sentimental and beautiful poem. How about "Spellbound"? as a title? :) Just a suggestion.

[stars are far]

Thank you so much for your suggestion , i like it and i will use it:)

[~]

Yay :):) I am happy :)

[stars are far]

im thankful :)