beside me

I couldn’t believe

What I’m passing through

No holds to hold

It was only  you..

 

I couldn’t find

Someone like you my friend

To support me

And stop my tears from falling ..

 

You are so great

My real angel

My great friend ..

 

I owe you

My happiness

My laughs in this moment

I dedicate this for you

Every laugh

And every smile

My great friend

10/8/2011

10:08 PM

Author's Note

i wrote this for a friend hope you like this
and please give me a good title :)
enjoy :)

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Superb work..!!!

Title can be ' My Friend'..

[Linda]

I want that friend too... xD

[nevermindfan1991]

First of all, I thought your structure was very creative and quite imaginative. This poem was well written and was easy to follow. I enjoyed reading it. Great Job and thanks for sharing.

[Layla Anne Massaro]

beautiful design. great dedication to a special friend. as what jeremy said, the title is fine so no need to change it, if u don't mind, change the first letter to capital. >:)

[Jeremy Baker]

The title is fine ... nice poem, too!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww great tribute! Just lovely! =D Friends are so important. They're there when we need them the most and the ones who supports us through good and bad. =) They help us find our real self.

[Desmund Tiny]

I love it!!! very nice and heartfelt...... I like the picture too.... amazing.... ^^, thanks for the RR

[Lively]

Friend is one with whom we are we. With them we never pretends to be sincere or something else. They help us meet with real ourself.

[WriteWiz99]

LUV ITTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how about "Great Friend"

[sugar]

niceee poem