I will not stop

I will not stop

A Poem by stars are far

I will keep waiting for you

As long as I’m breathing

 

I will keep waiting for you

As long as my blood is moving …

 

I will keep waiting for you

As long as I’m alive …

 

I’ll keep writing for you

Till my hands get paralyzed …

And my mouth can’t speak

And I can’t listen ..

 

I’ll keep dreaming of you

Till my dreams come true

And I hold your hands forever

Till you let me take you

And escape to the land of I’m satisfied …

 

I’ll keep loving you

Not till I die

But till my heart dies

And my soul raise

And my years fades

After that day

I will itch on your heart

I always loved you

and I will never hate you

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
For you ~s~
i love you and i will always do
hope you like this all
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love Soa's comment about this poem seeming neurotic and unmedicated but how can it be why love makes us all crazy and is the drug we all crave. Your promise to leave an itch upon his heart is wonderful, love the idea of love beyonf the grave. keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


I relate to this completely, its like me and you are having the same situation going on at the same time and we are feeling the same. I absolutly loved this, i dont have the guts to write something like tht for 'him'. My favorite lines are "Ill keep dreaming of you till my dreams come true" those lines are just perfect. Hope you get the guy, you did a great job, keep it up:)

*sugar*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh! Harrington!!! My favorite font style! :)))

I love these lines - "I’ll keep writing for you
Till my hands get paralyzed …" AGREE! XD

Totally like this poem! :D




Posted 12 Years Ago


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Without reasons for loving him or stating how you came about deciding to love him in this way... it comes off as neurotic and unmedicated.

Sao

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the font and structure. A lovely romantic poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Must be a lucky fellow whom you dedicated it. A nice poem. Nice expressions and nice words. I liked the font also. Great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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