Your answer

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A Poem by stars are far

once I asked your eyes

Why they are living ??

No answer was reviled

But I didn’t know why ..

 

Many years passed

And you didn’t answer

But one day

I was walking alone

With the moon and the stars

I saw you there

Walking with her

I was speechless

I was dying inside …

 

You didn’t care about me

And walked in your way

And I knew the answer for my question

Wasn’t what I expected

“It was you living for her “…

 

But I will still adore you 

© 2011 stars are far


Author's Note

stars are far
Dedicated for you ~s~ ..

hope you enjoy that ...

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You write well..!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loads of words for S, hope he's paying attention.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loving all you dedication this ~s~ your 'boyfriend' and the viewpoints I love as well :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A rose plant in the garden in the darkness of the night. The observer still knows the scent of the flower and the softness of the petals, without looking or having it. Your poem is such a sweet, unseen rose.

Posted 12 Years Ago


sad write really but so well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is kinda sad and im surprised you still adore him. Great write though

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad...Just sad! T_T
You're too nice to still adore him despite all the hurts you're experiencing... :(

Posted 12 Years Ago



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