I recognized that I belong to you

I recognized that I belong to you

A Poem by stars are far

I recognized that I belong to you

 

Sorry for being that person

That lies and cries in front of you

Sorry for hurting you

And passing through your heart

Without saying hi .

 

Sorry for breaking this nice relationship

And cross that ice bridge

For the other side .

Where you don't belong .

 

Sorry for all those bad words

I said for you

But I was that child

That is looking for fun

But now I knew

Where I do belong to

I belong to you .

 

Just come back .

© 2011 stars are far


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But now I know
to whom I belonged or belong

Sorry for correcting but the poem is so beautiful in it's sad realisation of what one had and wasted because in innocense we believed we would always have more time.

Nicely penned and very touching, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Kim
I felt sadness while reading this, Such a amazing write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The grammar is an issue, but it seems that has already been noticed.
also, if you said, "hello" rather than "hi" it would actually make a world of difference.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very fine piece of writing...
emotional and wonderfully written,
Great work again :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yay...I don't know why I suddenly felt a heartache while reading this! XD
A fine piece of writing...
Keep it up! :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


But now I know
to whom I belonged or belong

Sorry for correcting but the poem is so beautiful in it's sad realisation of what one had and wasted because in innocense we believed we would always have more time.

Nicely penned and very touching, keep em' coming

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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