Remember That

Remember that …

 

I never thought

That walking away was that easy

….

 

I thought I was colorless

But now I realized that

I’m the blue of the sky

I’m the silver of the moon

I’m the yellow of the sun ..

 

I found that

You were hiding me

Between the stars

And in places where no one can reach …

 

You were hiding me

Because you wanted me

To give you

Protection , warmth , and love..

You never loved me

You just wanted me to give

But you don’t want to …

 

I wasn’t able

To cross the gate

Which was for your heart

Because was for your heart

Because I was afraid

To find monsters ..

 

But now,

I crossed that

And find the truth

You were the monster

That I don’t want to know…

 

You were the one

That I was running away from

But I want you to know

I wasn’t a game

And I won’t be

And the game between us

Didn’t end yet

Because one day

You will come back

And beg under my knees

Not to be your bodyguard

But to be your love ..

 

Remember that …

Author's Note

but i re-recognized that walking away was not easy .....

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Such powerful words and emotions added to it. You picture unrequited love so perfectly, that you try to get into the heart of your significant other only to find that the monster you have been avoiding was him all along. Amazing write describing the pains of knowing that fact. Brilliant.

[Susan]

A very powerful poem. I love the word choice, and the way everything flows together. Wonderful poem! Great job, keep writing!

[Ysabel Reyes]

so simple yet all the words gave it away. what a powerful poem,i like it.

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooo.... STRONG!!! love that ending line "REMEMBER THAT!!!!!" get it girl do yo thang!!

[Kim's Poems]

such an emotional read, makes one ponder on what they have. Awesome write.

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Very beautiful and powerful. Many poems remind me of flowers, and this one reminds me of dark calla lilies.

[~ Stefanie ~]

This was beautiful! Such power and emotion behind your words. So much truth in the hardships and struggles in a relationship. This poem relates to some things in my life. You did a very good job!

[Kim]

Such an amazing powerful write, I like this write.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Powerful evocative emotions here...
A tremendous piece...
And yes regrets are a powerful emotion....
Terrific poetry :D