I will never Paint It Again

I will never Paint It Again

 

I was always a dreamer

That held the past in her eyes

And drew the future in her mind

Forgetting that I have a "present"...

 

I was always someone who follow you

Not on twitter or on Facebook

But in my mind and heart I did

I was always there for you ..

 

I was always the one who catches your dreams

And make my best for them to come true

Without giving my life a break

To make my dreams see the light ..

 

I was always the one who loved you

But you never look at me

So from now on

you are no longer mine..

 

I will stop being

your painter , your follower

and also that dreamer loves you

Man, i will never paint it again ...

 

18/5/2012

6;15 PM

Author's Note

Hope you like it .....

Reviews

[MOON]

Beautiful poignant write, expressive.

[just is]

Simply amazing, I really like this write.
I can feel the emotions.

[AK]

Brilliant poem! I loved your style of writing and choice of words. Keep writing!

[Lily Mae]

You tap into these feelings well...as always.. excellent work..xo

[khalid]

conflict is so much clear here. you have strong conflict between being in that love or leaving it,,it is not such an easy decision..it is really hurting to live in it and also hurting to live without it..anyways you have expressed your feelings very well in this poem..i really enjoyed reading specially it comes after long time you stoped in it, welcome back to writing..just i think it is better if you said..you never looked not look, that dreamer loving not loves..thank you for sharing

[Tai Ryens]

The pain and sorrow spoken in this poem was amazingly expressed. Every word of this piece comes together to make such a pretty poem. Good job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Soooo loved reading a piece by you, been a long time...
Moving on from someone you love is hardest thing ever, perhaps impossible, you express the will to do so perfectly.
Suhad, this is fantastic as always :D

[Sleeping Maiden]

wow. this is such an amazing write! The pain here is well expressed of someone being lost and moving on. I love how your crafted this so uniquely!! I love it. Great job! Wonderful piece!