Changed

For my real love also.. well ...

Changed

 

Why have you changed a lot

My life without you have stopped

It turned my white day into non-colored

And my full heart to simple gone ..

 

Why have you erased every smile

I haven't drew this by my pencil

I haven't drew this on my paper

I drew this on your heart by my soul.

 

Why have you left this heart today

It is still calling for you each and everyday

With my heart crying and learning how to die

But facing this life with full pride..

 

I won't beg you to come back again

Because my heart have lost the taste he want to gain

The taste of love and life my babe

It's now gone so my days ...

 

19/5/2012

3:37 PM

Author's Note

I hope you like this :)

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

This was very well expressed. The thoughts and emotions shown straight from begining to the ending. Very nice piece to read as well. I'm sorry for your sadness.. but I could really feel the hurt and uncertainty.. :)

[Tai Ryens]

You've written yet another amazing poem expressing your inner thoughts and emotions. I just love that second to the last stanza. Well done, once again. Keep it up!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Full of emotions,
love how you manage that in your pieces...
Terrific :D

[Sweets]

lol you forgot to mention the second you wrote it too :)
Very beautiful :)
keep it up nooboid =3