There She Goes

I wrote this a very long time ago. It pertains to an ex-girlfriend of mine. I cared very deeply for her. every saw that she did me wrong from the very start of our relationship. She did. I'm not really sure what she did. It's been three years now and stil

There she goes, down the lonely road.
Where she has been, no need to know.

There she goes, knowing not of the truth.
All on her own. Waiting. Searching. All in the wrong places.
For someone to save her.

There she goes, falling down.
To a pit of eternal sorrow.
A pit she knowingly dug herself,
but did not start.

There she goes, with people all around.
Blinded by the controlled smiles and laughter.
she has learned well to produce.

There she goes, in and out of my arms.
she stays for a while she leaves.
she did not know i could catcher her.
To bring her out of the pit of sorrow.

There she goes, now out of my reach.
I can only see her. Pain. Sorrow. Agony. Falseness.
she is still falling. Deeper. Deeper.
Away from the light.
Closer to the sorrow she feeds so willingly.

There she goes, away forever.
Closer and closer to her beloved Death.

Reviews

[Jason]

nice piece. I can feel the pain that you had in this, and it seems worse because it didn't seem like it was something that was wrong between the two of you but within herself that cause yall to drift apart.

"There she goes, falling down.
To a pit of eternal sorrow.
A pit she knowingly dug herself,
but did not start. "


Thanks

[Pester D. Finches]

nice, i really feel the pain of this, as someone who knows that feeling all to well. great job, im really geting used to you're writing style, it suits you well- pester