I laugh my dear, indeed i do.

I laugh my dear, indeed i do.

A Poem by Suitman

i laugh my dear of what you said on that tragically wonderful day, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear because of what my heart, soul, and mind have done and are doing all because of you, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear because your efforts to heal me are and will be usless because you refuse to let things be, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear all on the fact that i believed you even when i know you lied, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear on that you believe that if you wait and see everything has a chance to "be right again" even when you know your fate on the matter is already written, and is visible by everyone, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear knowing that it's all nothing but a cover on the truth and you think i can not see under it, indeed i do.
i laugh my dear because you are blind to what i have said all because you choose to be, indeed i do.
i will laugh even more my dear when you realize i've left forever, and i wasn't lying. INDEED I WILL

© 2009 Suitman


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wow, nice, i realy like the repeating of the title throughout the poem. the writing style makes the poem harsh and painful to read, but it works well with the topic, i look forward to reading more of your poems and would be honored if you would review some one my work. thanks -pester

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