Death

Death

A Poem by Sukhmeet Singh
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This poem is about death

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      The fool, oh the fool, has wasted the, wasted the life,
      Now, that who had fooled, shall learn, as all have been fools,
      One, one must know, what the use of all their years were,
      Those who know, of the one name, will be free from drools,
      One who must forget, that must be forget, what, known knife,
      
     Death, death, should this be forgotten, that which is uniting all,
     That path of death, can, can that path be avoided, to all, all,
     Death has answered, have it answered yes, we have no interest,
     But, we should know, that death has a path, to all as an arrest,
       
     One fool knows to drool, for he or she, shall be in the true pool,
     Goals for those alive, must be known, as one must eventually dive,
     You, you, you of all, shall not be a fool about to drool over the pool,

     All are ultimate, in the true desire, for the false death,
     Fools, please, please make goals, so lets stop being cruel,
     
     That should be all, for the life, in the small rice

© 2012 Sukhmeet Singh


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5-4-3-2-1
Superb method to write something about "death".

Well written.
Although, I have to ask you something,

"That should be all, for the life, in the small rice"

In this line, what exactly does "rice" symbolize? I am confused as to if it should be "price", but nevertheless, I would love to know the author's thought on it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sukhmeet Singh

8 Years Ago

It was suppose to represent that since rice is light, the price that life gives to death is nothing .. read more
Death comes to all regardless. There is a lot of truth in this poem. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very unique layout of words. Unfortunately to most the message will not be heard due to ego, power, money, blood... "Fools, please, please make goals, so lets stop being cruel."...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sukhmeet Singh

8 Years Ago

Do you think that the attempt to send the message was good, as even I know that some would not give .. read more
Damien Davison

8 Years Ago

Oh yes, absolutely. It was great for you to share it
Sukhmeet Singh

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the appreciation
Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 13, 2012
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