All hallows eve...

All hallows eve...

A Poem by ♥SunkissAngel♥

The howls of the winds
through the dark night.

Ghost and ghouls
Give us a fright.

Oh watch out on this
All hallows eve.

'cuz stuff isn't
what they seem.

this night,
on all hallows eve

When the ghosts
and Ghouls arn't
just a dream.

 watch out and keep
 one eye open
when you sleep.

Because stuff is sure to
 make you scream.

On this all hallows eve.



© 2010 ♥SunkissAngel♥


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Cute write! I liked the simplicity of this piece, and the incorporation of all the classic horror allusions, as well as the awesome graphics. xD This flowed really well, and the rhyming wasn't a disadvantage at all, as I had first anticipated. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


spooky nice write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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a nice little sing song poem :) happy belated halloween lolz

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Tom
Loved it

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write, i enjoyed this! Keep up the great work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great! If I might suggest fixing a couple typos, in the third-to-last stanza, "and" and "keep" should not be one word. Also, there are a couple places it should be capitalized but isn't. Other than that, great!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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♥SunkissAngel♥
♥SunkissAngel♥

Fort Drum, NY



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Bonjour!! Hey every one you may know me but if not my name is samantha but i go by sam, Sunkiss, or Pepper sometimes. I am 15 years old and is currently in a wonderful relation ship. I have two si.. more..

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