My Messy Room

My Messy Room

A Poem by LadyShennel

My room is messy that’s fine with me

No time to clean no one will see

Clothes and shoes all over the floor

Just excuse the mess and close my door

 

Mama is yelling clean up that room

Pick up those clothes and use the broom

Just a little here and there

Clothes on the floor everywhere

 

Organizing stuff in my head

I’ll push everything under my bed

Now the smell what can I use

I better spray in all my shoes

 

Mama’s coming let me get through

Mama’s looking in at the view

You call this clean mama yelled

The stink is strong can you tell

 

How can you sleep in all this junk

Your room smells worser than a skunk

Clean up this room and make it shine

Make it quick there’s not much time

 

When I come back I need to see

Your room sparkling and very clean

No more playtime games and fun

Until your room is clean and done

© 2013 LadyShennel


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Ha! This is so true! A messy home is lived-in, that's for sure! Fun rhythm to this poem. :)

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LadyShennel

10 Years Ago

thanks, my daughter will kill me if she knew i post a picture of her closet and wrote about her room.. read more

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LadyShennel
LadyShennel

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A stay-at-home single mom of 4. We live in Texas, and love going to church. I love to write. I've been writing since a teen in high school. I live my life for both God and my children. I am very .. more..

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