Cause and Effect

Cause and Effect

A Poem by Justin D
"

Everything that happens brings an advantage. Use them wisely

"

Each step I take,
brings progression.
Each time I argue,
brings knowledge.
Each person I meet,
brings diversity.
Each friend I trust,
brings hope.
Each day I'm alone,
brings clarity.
Each insult i hear,
brings strength.
Each cut I make,
brings discipline.
Each drop of blood shed,
brings retribution.

Using weakness to advantage,
perseverance, so long.
Until the day I die,
I'll proove that I'm strong

© 2009 Justin D


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The last line you mis-spelled "prove" but this was really good. I think this way sometimes also.

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Added on September 22, 2009

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Justin D
Justin D

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